
The work of Arsenal youngsters Bukayo Saka and Gabriel Martinelli down the left-hand side has been one of this season’s successes. The two youngsters, both 18 years old, have developed a partnership that compliments their own playing styles. Saka has adjusted well at left back, and has been able to score and provide an assist in 3 separate matches. Martinelli’s enthusiasm is evident and his composure in front of goal is unerring. He has become the first teenager since Nicolas Anelka to score 10 goals for Arsenal in a season. The progress of Saka and Martinelli has been a shining light in a disappointing campaign for Arsenal.
I liked the headline. And most of your writing here was strong, carrying on from your use of a sub-clause in the second sentence.
As Juan wrote previously, it would be great to have pictures. The way you have written the intro is a little awkward, because there are problems with apostrophes, hyphenation and your word choice. An alternative would be ‘The work of Arsenal youngsters Bukayo Saka and Gabriel Martinelli down the left-hand side has been one of this season’s successes’. It is ‘He has become the first teenager…’
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